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Hello, I offer article writing / editing services as a side job during certain periods. I provide editing for a previously added article on the site. I came across sentences in the text that shocked me. There are many examples like this sentence, but I believe this one is sufficient. The author needs to explain that after clicking on the search icon, they should describe how the 'Run' application should open. This can be explained in one or two sentences. However, unnecessary sentences have been constructed below to fill the word count. I understand providing background information, but this is just a bunch of clichés.
"If you click on the search option and type 'Run' in the search bar, you should see the Run application pop up. Run is a computer program that allows us to execute necessary commands by typing them in here. With these commands, the computer can repair its system and perform system operations. After typing 'Run' in the search bar, it will show us details about what is available on the computer related to the word 'Run.' The application we are looking for is the Run option, which you can find at the top under the title of Application. Click on this option." Do not do your job like this if you are going to do it. It's a waste. People don't give you money out of kindness; they want their websites to succeed and get results from their investments. So, what are those friends who do it this way doing? Obviously **************. Another sentence... When you open this Computer application, you will see this screen. With this Computer application, we can learn about the memory status of various devices and the computer itself. In this application, there is information about the memory status of Local Disk, DVD Drive, and other devices connected to the computer. The part that will be useful to us is the Local Disk. Right-click on Local Disk to open the second screen as shown and click on the Properties option at the bottom of this screen. The point being made here is to open the computer, right-click on the local disk, and click on the Properties option.
"If you click on the search option and type 'Run' in the search bar, you should see the Run application pop up. Run is a computer program that allows us to execute necessary commands by typing them in here. With these commands, the computer can repair its system and perform system operations. After typing 'Run' in the search bar, it will show us details about what is available on the computer related to the word 'Run.' The application we are looking for is the Run option, which you can find at the top under the title of Application. Click on this option." Do not do your job like this if you are going to do it. It's a waste. People don't give you money out of kindness; they want their websites to succeed and get results from their investments. So, what are those friends who do it this way doing? Obviously **************. Another sentence... When you open this Computer application, you will see this screen. With this Computer application, we can learn about the memory status of various devices and the computer itself. In this application, there is information about the memory status of Local Disk, DVD Drive, and other devices connected to the computer. The part that will be useful to us is the Local Disk. Right-click on Local Disk to open the second screen as shown and click on the Properties option at the bottom of this screen. The point being made here is to open the computer, right-click on the local disk, and click on the Properties option.